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Friday, October 14, 2011
Holiday in Jogjakarta
Last semester, I spent my holiday in Jogjakarta. I went to Jogjakarta for a week. I went there with five others. We stayed at Cakra Kembang hotel. It located at Kaliurang Street. Our first destination is museum Vandenburgh which located next to Malioboro. After went to museum, we were sight seeing at Malioboro market. We bought many kinds of Jogjakarta shirts. After we felt satisfy to walk around at Malioboro, we off to hotel to take a rest. In the night, we went to Alun-alun to ride bicycle. When it was 10pm, we decided to off to hotel. In the beginning second day, we started our trip to Bringharjo traditional market. There we just bought traditional foods, we did not buy clothes. Satisfied at Bringharjo market, we continued our trip Ambarukmo Plaza. Ambarukmo Plaza is the most well-known mall in Jogjakarta. On third day we were off to beaches in Jogja. Firstly we visited Baron beach. Baron area is not large, and the view there not nice enough. After it we went to Kukup beach. Kukup has gorgeous view for the landscape so wide and the sand so white. The sea so clean and the water colored blue. I love to visit Kukup most. On the fourth day we visited lake which located in Wates. The lake’s name is Sermo. Sermo has wide area, but I don’t know how km it is. We just stayed there around 4 hours and then we off to Prambanan temple. Actually, Prambanan isn’t located in Jogjakarta, but it really close to Jogjakarta. Prambanan located in Klaten. On the fifth day I went to my cousin’s home. I went to his home alone without my friends. I stayed at my cousin’s home until go home. I conclude that Jogja is really nice place to visit. There are so many recreation places with low price. FYI, there are many laundry with cheap price. You just need Rp. 2.500 to laundry your clothes for a Kg. That’s why I love to spent my holiday in Jogja.
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The trip seems so great then:-). It's good u state and mark TS and CS. It's long composition within a paragraph, so u have to arrange the supporting sentences systematically to achieve well-written paragraph. The whole composition looks good; however, there are several important things u have to put into account. First, dealing with the use of appropriate and effective transition signals. It does help writers to achieve coherence if only they can use it well. Next, of course dealing with grammar. Some sentences are unclear as u a mistaken in using the parts of speech and any aspects in grammar such as the use of time clause, missing to be, mix-tenses, and the consistency in using the tenses. Moreover, the punctuation still need improving. It's so essential to avoid fragment and run on sentence. Make up the things I mention, ok. Em waiting 4 ur better composition:-)
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